Saturday, July 30, 2011

6 Sentence Sunday: A Cheap Voyeur


Thanks for dropping by to let me share my Sunday 6 with you. I feel lucky to have discovered this talented group, who not only represent a variety of genres but a number of different countries as well. If you haven’t already done so, pay a visit to the 6 Sunday site and sample their work. I promise, you’ll be glad you did. 

I’ve been pulling each week’s selection from my book, A Bed of Thorns and Roses, available as an ebook from Amazon, Smashwords, Barnes & Noble, and other major ebook distributors. The story is a romance based on Beauty and the Beast and is set during America’s Gilded Age.

Last week, Jonathan watched from behind the curtains as Isabelle arrived, ducking out of sight when she sensed his presence and looked toward the window. Earlier, faced with losing the use of his right hand, Jonathan had given in to his doctor and agreed to hire a secretary. On first seeing Isabelle, Jonathan realizes to his horror that the doctor has hired a woman for the job. Though his mask hides the worst of his disfigurements, he knows she will react with disgust and even fear at the sight of him.

After last week’s selection, I left you with the question, how will Jonathan resolve his dilemma? Well, I’m sorry to say, he doesn’t. Not yet at least.

It is now Sunday morning. The servants have left to attend church services in the nearby village. Isabelle has stayed behind, and while she walks in the garden, Jonathan finds himself spying on her once again.

A Bed of Thorns and Roses #4

The woman stopped beneath his window, for no apparent reason. Jonathan tensed, ready to hide behind the curtains if she should look up. Instead, she bent her head, then lifted her arms and placed her hands on the crown of her hat, feeling for the pin that anchored it to her hair. Her bodice stretched taut, revealing the shape of her breasts beneath. Jonathan held his breath, feeling like a cheap voyeur in a penny arcade but unable to look away.

She twisted around as the hat came free, tossing it on the grass, then turned her back to him. He could almost believe that she knew he was watching and purposely meant to deny him a glimpse of her face.

Next week:  Jonathan finally sees Isabelle’s face and knows what he must do.


13 comments:

  1. Sondra, I was looking forward to his POV and you have dazzled me. Thank you! I love this story.

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  2. Intriguing six - does she know he's watching her in this scene as well?

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  3. Thanks Alix. What a nice compliment.

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  4. Liz, the answer is NO. She would run away if she knew.

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  5. I guess we'll have to wait and see

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  6. Very intriguing! Jonathan's voice comes through well.

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  7. Love how she's avoiding showing her face to him

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  8. Intriguing. Can't help but wonder if she knows he's watching her.

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  9. Ooh, I wonder if she does know, and is teasing him. Great snippet.

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  10. oooh. I want to know more! great six!

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  11. Very enjoyable six. You are weaving quite a story.

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  12. wonderful sense of place - great job!

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