Saturday, July 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Not Even Human


This is my first Six Sentence Sunday offering, and so I thought I would start at the beginning. The excerpt below is from the first scene of my newly released ebook A Bed of Thorns and Roses. Based on the theme of Beauty and the Beast, the story is set during America's Gilded Age. The hero Jonathan is heir to one of the wealthiest robber barons in the country. He had every advantage money could buy until a tragic fire left him horribly disfigured. Now he lives the life of a recluse in his isolated country mansion. The kind-hearted Nellie, Jonathan's English maid, joined the handful of servants there over six years ago and has yet to set eyes on her employer. As she carries his afternoon tea tray to his room, Nellie considers the stories she's heard about Jonathan and his father.

That was bad enough, but what they said about his son was worse. They talked about how nobody ever saw Old Cornelius Nashe’s queer son, and just as well. What was left of him after the fire wasn’t fit to set eyes on, that’s what people said. Some claimed he wasn’t even human.
Balderdash, her mum would have called it, pure balderdash. Ignorant tales carried by ignorant folk.

To learn if Nellie's mum is right, you can find A Bed of Thorns and Roses at Amazon, Barnes & Noble,  and Smashwords.

20 comments:

  1. Welcome to the Six Sentence Sunday. You did a fantastic job and a wonderful six.

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  2. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Great six!

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  3. 'ignorant tales carried by ignorant folk', how true. Great first snippet, love the premise of the story, and welcome!

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  4. Hi,

    I'm new to six, too! Nice brief: thanks for that.

    The snippet is great, it tells a lot in a few words! ;)

    best
    F

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  5. Love how her voice comes across. Welcome to SSS. :)

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  6. Loved the last line - you could practically hear her voice!

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  7. Love Beauty and the Beast type stories. On my TBR now.

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  8. Lovely, lovely writing. Nellie's voice is pitch perfect and wonderful. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Great first entry! Stick around.

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  9. Great opening andd a perfect way to begin Six sunday

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  10. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.
    Wonderful six you're giving us. Just from the snippet I'm going to have to go check out the book

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  11. I get a real sense of the time period in this piece. Excellent snip! And welcome to the party!!

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  12. A great start to SSS, Welcome!

    You have a very authentic voice and the voice of your character shines through just as clearly.
    Very nice opening.

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  13. Thanks everyone for your comments. I am overwhelmed at what a welcoming group you are. Now to get caught up reading your sixes. This is so much fun!

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  14. Welcome to Six Sunday, what a fab six to start off with :) I'm left wondering if these rumors are true...how bad was he after the fire.

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  15. Big welcome and a great six to premiere with. Thank you.

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  16. Welcome to SSS! Great opening, and way to give us insight into someone who will doubtless be a wonderful character.

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  17. You'll love Six Sentence Sunday, and with your contribution today you'll fit right in. This is a friendly bunch.

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  18. Lovely sentiment! Can't wait to see what happens when she finally sees him. :)

    ~Xakara
    Dawn's Early Light 6SS

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  19. Welcome! ...how soon into the story was that 6?

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  20. Thanks, monkey. It's about the 4th paragraph. The whole scene isn't much more than a page and is the only scene in the book in Nellie's POV.

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